A Magical Mermaid by Elodie (Squirrel Class)

Once upon a time there was a little girl called Lucy and she had a fish tank. There were a lot of fish in it. One day a magical mermaid appeared. She was very beautiful but also very mean, so she put a magical spell on the fish and they disappeared! The mermaid then put a spell on Lucy but Lucy broke through it. Then the mermaid grew ugly but she also turned into a lovely person. Lucy and the mermaid talked for a long time and became best friends. Then the fish magically appeared in the tank! Lucy had her fish back and a lovely new mermaid friend.

Comments

  1. Mrs O2 March 2018 at 11:58

    Thank goodness a happy ending Elodie.

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  2. Mrs Gadd2 March 2018 at 12:13

    I like that your story shares a good message. It's so important to be a kind person just like you are.

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