Never throw rubbish everywhere again!!! by Ayden (Bumblebee Class)

Once upon a time, there was a boy called Tom. He loved throwing rubbish everywhere. One day when he was in the park, he found something glowing.........when he touched  it, a magic door appeared! So he gone into it and it took him to a forest. The forest was under the sea full of rubbish everywhere. The fish was stuck by a glass and the turtle was hurt by a can. They kept shouting for help! Tom saw that and felt very sad so he decided to clean up all the rubbish and never threw rubbish everywhere again.

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  1. Mrs Sloss19 February 2018 at 11:10

    Well done, Ayden - that's a great story!

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  2. Mrs O2 March 2018 at 12:07

    Your story has such a good message for everyone Ayden. We should all try very hard to pick up rubbish and recycle.

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